Myne have become the librarian she always wished to be: <Heroine? Saint? No, I’m an All-Works Maid (And Proud of It)! Volume 2> Please.
Sudennly the solved plot is not solved with a bit of a retcon. MC takes a bit of a background role and it shows. The story becomes unoriginal with the power of friendship. The frequent 4th wall breaks quickly became unfunny. 4th wall break as a running gag that characters will be kept from meeting or solving the misunderstanding feels like a slap to the face to the reader.
Hello Bookworm! I looked it up, and the Library in Alexandria — which just so happens to be the greatest in all of Yurgenschmidt, nay… even the entire world — has the following entries:
Yes she’s a good girl. Always striving to become better. When I find the time and motivation I’ll teach her to point out what’s ebook, print and audiobook as well. As it is right now it’s a bit confusing when there are 3 “1,1,1” listed.
4th wall breaks in general only work when in moderation. The less there are of them the funnier it is when there is one.
Myne have become the librarian she always wished to be: <Heroine? Saint? No, I’m an All-Works Maid (And Proud of It)! Volume 2> Please.
Sudennly the solved plot is not solved with a bit of a retcon. MC takes a bit of a background role and it shows. The story becomes unoriginal with the power of friendship. The frequent 4th wall breaks quickly became unfunny. 4th wall break as a running gag that characters will be kept from meeting or solving the misunderstanding feels like a slap to the face to the reader.
Hello Bookworm! I looked it up, and the Library in Alexandria — which just so happens to be the greatest in all of Yurgenschmidt, nay… even the entire world — has the following entries:
Heroine? Saint? No, I’m an All-Works Maid (And Proud of It)! by Seven Seas Entertainment: Vol. 1, 1, 1, 2, 2, 3
Yes she’s a good girl. Always striving to become better. When I find the time and motivation I’ll teach her to point out what’s ebook, print and audiobook as well. As it is right now it’s a bit confusing when there are 3 “1,1,1” listed.
4th wall breaks in general only work when in moderation. The less there are of them the funnier it is when there is one.