I sent this to a friend. She’s a normie. I’m an Aspie. I wonder what other Normies think.
I feel that my writing is kind of technical. It’s how I think. I’m just not sure what I could do to make it less technical.
(At this point I just just sent her a very welcome picture of my bed warmed cock that I took this morning.)
Imagine that, in some future, we had spent some time kissing, and hugging. I had spent some time licking and sucking your nipples while squeezing your breasts. I had made my way down to run my tongue from the bottom of one lip to the top, then from the bottom of the other lip to the top before sliding my tongue as far inside you as a could then up and over and around your clit. I had slipped two fingers inside you and gently stroked the front wall of your pussy while I worked your clit with my tongue and lips.
Then, I sat up took your hand, and pulled you up. I pulled you toward me and kissed you and you lowered your head and took my cock in your mouth, enjoying its thickness and the salty sweet precum that oozed out. Then, I put my hands under your chin and pulled your face to mine. I put my arm around your and pulled you to me and you slid into my lap with your legs around me. You felt my glistening cock head brush your lips then slip between them brushing against your clit. I put my arm around you and pull your chest against me kissing you deeply as you felt the head of my cock find your pussy.
You take a deep breath as we kiss, tighten your legs around my back, and feel the full length of my cock side deep inside you. I reach for your ass pulling you into my cock and pressing it as deep inside you as I can, holding that position while you press your breasts into my chest as we kiss passionately.
I like it. Sure, maybe it’s a bit more on the mechanical/technical side of describing the act. You could also describe the character’s emotions and how these things make them feel. But it’s not that obvious in such a short text. I think if you had given me that without a disclaimer, I wouldn’t have guessed it’s by someone who isn’t considered to be a normie…
Especially in the realm of erotica and pornographic stories, there are so many perspectives on things, fetishes and really outstanding things people like and focus on… The word “normal” kind of looses its meaning here.
There are guides on how to write erotica. It’s more focused to describe a scene than other kinds of fiction anyways. And I mean general tipps on storywriting apply if you want it to sound professional. Use past tense, choose a perspective from which the story is told, have a central theme and something that develops the narrative and characters and goes somewhere. But if you’re just doing it for you, you can skip all of these and just do whatever makes you happy. Except for consent of involved parties, there aren’t many rules to sexuality. There is some pressure by society, but in the end we all have to find out what we like and do that.
Thanks for the comments. I was asking her to imagine the setup right up until the list paragraph. Everything up to that point was leading up to the just paragraph. The letter was about the kiss and the penetration. She may come back and ask me what happens next. She most often does.
I agree with your comments about, “normal”. People with Asperger’s, at least those that I am close with, tend to see Asperger’s as a superpower rather than as any kind of deficit. We prefer to be direct and honest which “normies” see as a problem because it makes them uncomfortable.
I reached out to a long lost acquaintance who used to like receiving pictures of my cock. I told her that I had lost weight and was measuring over 7 inches. She asked for a picture. I teased a little bit but did eventually send her one. She asked a question which could have been a hint but I took it as not being one. Then another that could have been a hint but I took it as not being one. Later, after I made a delivery an hour from home and had time to think while driving, I went back and said, “I have Asperger’s which means that I don’t understand hints or subtle social clues. If this question was a hint and actually meant, ‘Have you thought about fucking me?’ the answer would be, ‘Yes.’”. I explained that she didn’t have to hint with me. She replied, 'Ok, if you don’t like hints, I have thought about sucking your cock. What now?" We have a date at a hotel next Wednesday. The Aspie way is so much easier.
Hehe, glad it turned out quite alright for you. I guess there might be a happy ending to that story/letter. And now I get the context of your writing.
I also really like people who are direct an honest. If it were up to me, we could skip most of the clues and hinting at things. I mean if we’re trying to convey something to another human being we can make a deliberate choice to either make it simple and just say what’s on our mind, or make it a riddle for them to solve. I like the first approach and I think it would be to the benefit of everyone if people chose to do it that way.
Ultimately your situation is a bit different anyways… I wouldn’t dare to ask a random person for sex, it would be wrong. But if you’re already sending dick pics and talking about your cock… ¯_(ツ)_/¯ You can probably skip the social etiquette and speak your mind. They’re the right person to be honest with, or they would have ran away way earlier. (My opinion)
So…the original Lust Letter that I posted was directed at one woman. The story in the comment was about another woman. I’ve known both women for more than 15 years. The first is married, unhappily, and has a reciprocated crush on me. We’ve talked and exchanged pictures for more than 10 years but she can’t make the decision to go ahead and give me a try so it’s all just talk. She calls my cock the most beautiful cock she’s ever seen and is always interested in seeing pictures. I passed through her workplace yesterday and sent her a message that read, “Know what was at your workplace yesterday?” She said, “What?” and I sent her a picture of my erect cock followed by the Lust Letter that’s the subject of this post.
(I, by the way, am also a sex addict (diagnosed but I’ve always been skeptical) and married to a former sex addict who is now asexual (due to childhood sexual trauma years before I met her.) She has told me that I’m free to go off the farm as long as I’m discrete and the locals don’t tongue wag about what I’m doing. We shared a couple of really great threesome relationships more than 10 years ago so she’s seen me fuck other women and taken pictures.)
The second woman is a member of our circle of friends. She sent me a message out of the blue many years ago saying, “(A mutual friend) said that you would show me your cock if I asked you to. Is that true.” I said, “Yes.” She said, “Can I see your cock?” I sent her pictures and a few videos. She was married at the time. We chatted in the context of our friends circle and some of her responses to me suggested to me (an Aspie) that she was not interested in me at all. I went completely casual platonic (completely flat). She told me yesterday that she interpreted the fact that I never initiated conversations with her or really talked to her to mean that I didn’t like her. I told her that her responses to me made me think that she didn’t like me. I then gave her the whole, “Introduction to Having a Relationship with Me, an Aspie” that the doctor who diagnosed me suggested I give to people that I might end up having more than a casual friendship with. She said that she now completely understands what went wrong all those years ago. I explained my wife’s rules to her. She asked if I had to tell my wife that it was her. I explained that my wife does not want to know the details. If she asks me if I’m fucking someone I will say, “Yes.” If she asks who I will tell her that I can’t answer that. I don’t expect her to ask either question.
So, in the end, this second woman is someone that I have a very peripheral social relationship with years ago that I thought didn’t like me. I knew that she liked pictures of my cock and I was feeling happy about my weight loss and how I now have more useable cock and the fact that I thought is was looking pretty nice. She asked for pictures, I teased, then sent her a couple (one showing the head of my cock at 7.1 inches on a ruler.) She objected that she couldn’t masturbate to that pictures so I sent her another (of my erection under a pair of my new, smaller underwear which I think look really good on me and my erection.) There was some other discussion where she dropped what I would have thought were obvious hints which I treated as casual platonic because that’s what I had learned that our relationship was. Then, after thinking about it, I went back and introduced the Aspie thing and challenged her on a couple of the things she had said and asked (first, that she was no longer married, and second asking me why I reached out and if she was on some mental list of mine, and she reminded me that I had offered to get together with her to let her watch me masturbate). I told her that if the question about being on a list really meant, “Have I ever thought about fucking you” the answer would be, “yes”. I told that if she asked, “Can I suck your cock?” the answer would also be, “yes”. That started a conversation after an hour of which we had decided that we were going to fuck. She asked for a more revealing picture that she could masturbate to that evening. I sent her one. We then spent a day and a half talking about parameters and she said, “Let’s get together soon.” I said, “Should we look at our calendars?” She told me when she was available, I found three dates, one next week and two the following week, that worked and she chose the soonest one. I made the hotel reservation using my points (I have lots) and we’re set for next Wednesday evening.
Neither of these women are what I would call a, “random person”. I have relationships with both of them. I was missing things because she was hinting and I was making them to casual platonic. I needed her to be blunt of overcome that masking. She did, and were going to have sex.
Have you considered sharing pictures on here?
I think that their opinions about the attractiveness of my cock have a lot to do with their feelings about me. I think it’s pretty average looking but I love it. It’s 7.1" long and 5 inches around. It’s straight with a slight upwards curve that the ladies seem to enjoy. It isn’t porn huge or porn thick, it’s just my cock